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ART 425  Artist in Context

 

Visual Analysis Writing: The Content Development Phase

 

Why Analyze?

analáyásis

The process of breaking a complex thing into its parts in order to better understand how those parts and their interrelationships create the whole.

 

We analyze a work of art to better understand it. Some might argue that art should be simply experienced without any analysis while others might argue that a more in depth understanding of something deepens and enriches any experience. But we donÕt have the luxury of choosing. As art producers, it is essential we do our utmost to understand how an artwork functions. There are lots of ways to analyze a work of art. Art historians and critics often analyze an artwork in terms of its historical, professional, and social contexts. This sort of analysis entails considering a broad range of factors that fall far outside an individual artwork in itself. In our case we will limit our analysis to the consideration of a single work of art in terms of how and what it directly communicates to its audience (us) because this is the type of direct visual analysis that is often most relevant to studio artists. Note that an analysis like this relies only on what we perceive in the work directly including depicted subject matter, referenced content, and formal properties. That is why I call it visual analysis. You might also see it referred to as formal analysis, but strictly speaking, a formal analysis is more limited in that it only addresses form elements not image content. Neither visual nor formal analysis takes into consideration information outside of the work itself including artistÕs statements of intention, other critical interpretations, or contextualizing information.

 

Visual Analysis: A Study of Effect and Cause

efáfect –noun

1. A result: something that is produced by an agency or cause; a consequence.

4. An impression:  a mental or emotional impression produced, as by a painting or a speech.

5. A meaning or sense; purpose or intention.

 

cause- noun

1. That which makes something happen

 

For our purposes, an ÒanalysisÓ of a work of art can be understood as an explanation of cause and effect relationships.  Any artwork can be said to create certain effects. This can be understood simply as a singular quality or impression that a work makes but more often, the effect of an artwork is a product of interactions between multiple qualities and the inferences that may follow. In this way effect is an aspect of a workÕs content or meaning. Thus a visual analysis is a reasoned explanation of the connection between the elements of the work (cause) and the impression they make on the viewer (effect). Considering these connections broadly enables the analyzer to address the meaning of the work.

 

But keep in mind that a visual analysis is not just a description of an artwork, nor is it a bunch of observed effects, nor is it just a declaration of a workÕs meaning, nor is it even a list of effects and their causes. You have to make a claim about a quality or aspect of an artworkÕs expressive nature (thesis) and name your reasons based on evidence observed within the work itself (outline of your supporting argument), and then ÔargueÕ it in a clear, understandable, reasonable manner (explain in detail how these causes give rise to the effect or meaning in question).

 

Breaking the Analysis Process into Steps

Your final visual analysis essay must include all of these things organized and written in a clear, connected, reasoned manner. But writing an analysis is much like making a work of art. It doesnÕt just happen, it is built step by step through a productive process. So we will break this process into three distinct phases; the content development phase where you will focus on developing the thesis and supporting argument that will form the content of your analysis. the essay structuring focus phase where you will focus on organizing and articulating these ideas into something coherent for others to read, and finally the writing focus phase where we will work to improve articulation, grammar, and readability of your writing.

 

 

The Content Development Phase (Visual Analysis writing only)

 

Step 1 and 2 can be complete as notes (no need to hand them in but keep them in your notebook because I might ask to look at them). All parts of step 3 and 4 should be typed out (please label each step) and submitted as one MS Word doc titled  yourlastname_va_content.doc. See below for exact details for each step.

 

Step 1. Observe and Respond (in your notebook)

Step 2. Find a Focus (in your notebook)

Step 3. Develop your focus

A. Nutshell

B. Ask questions

C. Redraft nutshell

Step 4. Develop a thesis

A. Draft a Thesis

B. Assess with supplied prompts

C. Redraft thesis

 

 

 

Step 1. Observe and Respond (on paper!)

 

The first step in analyzing a work of art is to experience its effects. This is done by both exhaustive observation of the works qualities in all of its aspects and the initial responses you have to these qualities. If you have not done this a lot I recommend using question prompts (as can be found in Barnet pgs. 77-144) as a way get beyond the most obvious features and make the type of detailed observations that might otherwise not occur to you. You can choose to begin with observations only or with just your responses. But remember it is the connection between these things that you are ultimately after. So I recommend at least trying to do both simultaneously but keep it simple and avoid jumping to larger conclusions (leave that for later). If you are struck by an impression/response write that down and then ask what might be causing that, if nothing occurs to you move on. If you make an observation about a feature of the work write that down. Quickly jot down any initial responses that this observed feature creates for you. But again, donÕt labor it. My guess is that you will end up with a list that is observation heavy. That is natural. Consider all aspects of the work beyond depicted subject matter including all formal and physical properties, title, viewing context, overt and implied references to other art or non-art topics.

 

I recommend making a two-column chart.  You donÕt need to fill in both columns immediately, sometimes relationships between effect and quality will come to you as you go or maybe you will have multiple things to add to what youÕve already noted. You might even begin to organize your observations into appropriate groups such as multiple observations about the color palette, or the way a figure is rendered, or the way the space is organized etc. (but donÕt labor this, reorganization will be the next step) The most important thing is to keep going and not get bogged down and, donÕt edit out any thoughts so your list is as complete as possible. Example:

qualities

response

 

 

Two distinct objects next to each other but not interacting, one is clearly a female figure, the other is not as identifiable.

 

-Flat, pinned down in space

-Female main focus

Left hand female figure:

-abstracted into geometric planes

 

-Modern, reminds me of cubism, not organic

-dancing but yet pinned by the grid

-Mechanical ballet, static if not restrained

-painted in varying values of red

 

-sort of fleshy, feels like classic 2d design

The other object in values of blue

-So is the grid

 

-It looks wrench like and is made up of circles

 

 

Color/ green and red are complimentary

Sickly, artificial, inorganic

 

Grid both fixes the figures and divides up canvas

All shapes are hard edge

 

 

Grid makes it feel very clean, matter of fact, no hand

WomanÕs midsection is connected to left side of canvasÉcome to think of it the right hand shape is connected to the right side.

?

 

Title is ÒMadonna & ChildÓ

 

Such a specific naming makes me reconsider all aspects in terms of this ideaÉ

 

 

 

 

Step 2.  Discover Your Focus

 

Start with what you have written down. Look at all your observations and responses and see if you find linkages. Begin to physically reorganize your list by putting related things together as a way to begin to see connections. Some people recommend Venn diagramming, using index cards, or other visual ways of seeing interrelationships. As you begin to reveal connections go back and reconsider observed features that you were not at first able to interpret but maybe now see as fitting into larger patterns. There are a number of things you can do to move from individual bits of observations and responses:

1. Find common themes by exploring the relationships between things (connections and parallels but also contrasts!)

Does the use of artificial colors relate to the mechanical feel of the geometrical forms?

2. See things in terms of each other (bring one thing to bear upon another)

If this is a ÒMadonna and ChildÓ then how might one understand the significance of the grid?

3. Go beyond generalizations by forcing yourself to make distinctions.

The form is femaleÉwhat type of female? Is she sexualized because she is nude?

4. Broaden the scope of your observations by considering implications.

If the mechanical female is labeled as a ÔMadonnaÕ then what is being said about this classic relationship?

 

DonÕt skimp on this discovery phase. It is the very heart of this process. Do you begin to reveal a significant idea of what this artwork is about and how it goes about communicating this meaning? It might be undefined and disorganized but this could be the beginning of a thesis! Once you have a germ of an idea go back to the artwork and your list of observations and restart the process of observation and response over again but this time with this idea leading your search. Once youÕve thoroughly re-explored the work in this way, it is time to begin to better define to this loose ideaÉ

Note: through this process of searching for connections, remember that meaning in art is more connotative than denotative. We canÕt analyze a work of art like we would a simple concrete phenomena. Meaning in art is such that it points us toward a realm of ideas and associations and rarely resolves itself  into a single all-inclusive statement (this artwork means x).

 

 

 

 

Step 3.  Develop and clarify your focus

 

There are a few activities that can help you move from a rough idea to a something that ultimately becomes a thesis.  

A. Nutshell

According to Karen Gocsik of the Dartmouth Writing Center, ÒNutshelling is the simple process of trying to explain the main point of your observations in a few sentences.Ó  When you put your thoughts in a nutshell, you come to see just how your thoughts fit together and what the overall "point" is. In short, nutshelling Òhelps you to take your observations and to transform them into something meaningful, focused, coherent.Ó Try nutshelling a couple of times to see if you can improve or vary your statement better express your idea. It is better to do a number of versions and then select and incorporate as feels right rather than trying to do it in one single pass.

 

B. Ask and Answer Questions

To add depth and insight to your idea, go back to your nutshelled idea and the work itself and ask challenging questions (pretend your are me, what questions would I ask if you presented me with this idea?) Questions might challenge your idea, ask how other aspects of the work fit in and or ask to explain how examples support your idea. Write out at least 6 questions and your answers. 

 

C. Redraft your nutshell idea in response to this activity.

 

 

Step 4. Develop a thesis

 

A. Draft an Initial Working Thesis

Time to try to draft a complete working thesis (a complete thesis is one that both makes a claim and gives and overview of your argument). Develop your support by considering what needs to be said in order to explain and prove your claim. This will mostly consist of observations taken directly from the work but might also include addressing broader assumptions. Identify the most relevant examples being sure they include a diversity of elements in the work (subject matter, material, rendering style, formal properties, title, context, attitude etc). Then go back and test your claim in terms of the artwork. Look for the less obvious examples (are there ways other aspects of the work that might fit your claim?)

B. Write a one-page assessment of your initial thesis in light of your questions and the prompts copied below thesis in response.

C. Redraft your thesis

 

 

Thesis Assessment Prompts

 

Thesis Assessment:

  • Is your thesis complete in that includes both your proposition and major points of your support argument?
  • Does your thesis directly address a primary condition of this artwork? How could it be rewritten to better align with the point you want to make?
  • Is your thesis too general or too specific? How might it be better focused? How might it be broadened?
  • Is it written in a way that is both clear and engaging? What keeps it from being engaging?

Support Assessment: Are the points you make to support your thesis well selectedÉ

  • Do they address a diversity of elements in the work (subject matter, material, rendering style, formal properties, title, context, attitude etc)                                                   
  • Do they address the most relevant elements? Are you missing obvious things or do you include things that are not as important?
  • Are there gaps in your thinking? Is there a coherent cause and effect relationship between your thesis and supporting elements?

 

1 Karen Gocsi, http://www.dartmouth.edu/~writing/materials/student/ac_paper/develop.shtml

 

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